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Wednesday, October 16, 2013

Who should be blamed? (Argumentative Essay)


Abdul Qodir Jaelani that is also known as Dul is a 13 year old boy whose car were crashed to a Grand Max and Avanza car. He is also known as the son of a very successful famous singer, Ahmad Dhani. This 13 year  old kid, killed 7 people in total and injured people. The story began when Dul wans to drop off his friend and his girlfriend. They’re house is located in Bogor. After he dropped them in Bogor, he went home by passing Jagowari Highway. Jagorawi Highway is the only way to go back home. His Speedometer shows that his speed reaches 105km/h which is quite fast that he lose control and he turned around his car to the side of the road. The car from different direction can not control the car too and end up two car crashed just because of Dul's Car. Dul is fully responsible on this action. 
The reason is because; firstly, Dul asked a permission to his dad to go to his mom's house because there's a party going on. But then he lied to his dad yang went to his girlfriend's house. He's a 13 year old boy, and he needs a driver to drive him safely. But then, there's a fact is some news that Dul dismissed his driver due to overtime. His father admitted that he didn't know that Dul dismissed his driver and drive alone at night. People might think that it's his father's fault, but guess what? Dul told his driver to stop driving him just for a period of time without confirmed from his dad.
Secondly, Dul is a 13 year old boy. His age is the same like most of the 8th Graders. We agreed that a 13 year old boy can make a decision on his own. Because on the age of 13, it's the puberty time. Puberty controls the mind and might make people made a huge mistake on their decision. But, this doesn't makes you go alone, driving at night and killed 7 people by car accident. 
However, this accident has already happened, there's nothing to change because we cannot go back to the past nor going instantly to the future. All we can do is just taking this as a lesson. In a conclusion, we disagree that his father should be the one who take responsible on Dul's car accident. Because it's not the father's fault, his father never agreed from the first that he can drive by himself. Therefore, the police shouldn't put Dul's father to the jail.

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