In this unit, we learn about debates and argumentative essays.
In the argumentative essay, I think I did well on the formats, because my
format is well structured and it is clear enough that people can differentiate
the format I’m using. The thesis statement was also good; I stated it clearly
and use 2 reasons. The format that I actually use is the
introduction-pro-pro-con-conclusion, because for me it’s easier to make the
essay and the thesis statement. The bibliography I made is also tidy and good
enough. The improvement I need to make is the grammars and my words on the
essay. But if I can improve them like right now, I can get better score.
If the debate I can make good topics and the explanation that I'm telling was also good. But I am not that confident enough to tell it and I'm kind of shaking when I'm in front on the class, Ms H and Mrs Clegg. I’m the group that agrees with the topic. The topic for debate is “Globalization will lead to a better future”. So after all I need to improve my confidence and also the explanation.
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